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Schiphol Airport, Summer day, some are going, some will stay.
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Roly
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(1960) 2008-11-12 19:06
The people on the right with the sunflowers in the background provide a potentially interesting subject. People walking out of images are however usually undesirable, and cropping part of them does not improve the result. I find that there is also too much dull pavement in the picture: you should have moved in closer.
saxo042
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(16198) 2008-11-12 19:40
Hi Daniel,
Even before reading Roly´s remark, I saw what is wrong here. I made a WS for you to show the possibilities in cropping, hope you don´t mind
Regards
Gunnar
mamcg
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(4557) 2008-11-12 19:54
Daniel, you're a bit late and I wanted this lady 3 steps back.
Still it is a nice shot
it says the story by it self
well shot.
TFS.
Photo Information
- Copyright: Daniel Combellick (danielius) (36)
- Genre: Miejsca
- Medium: Kolorowe
- Date Taken: 2008-08-08
- Categories: Transport
- Camera: Nikon D300, Nikkor 18-200mm AFS DX 3.5-5.6 IF-ED VR
- Naświetlenie: f/10.0, 1/400 sekund
- More Photo Info: view
- Wersja zdjęcia: Oryginalna wersja, Workshop
- Date Submitted: 2008-11-12 19:02
