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loneroc (1233) 2008-07-28 13:38

Hi Bruno! I was in Utah last year and chose to go to Bryce instead of Zion. Should have made it to Zion, too. It looks great! Well, another time. I like your photo. It's interesting combination of different textures and shapes. There are two things that I will point out, though. First thing is the sharpness. It doesn't seem to be extremely sharp. There's so many small details that it should be pin-sharp. Another minor thing - that guy on the bottom right. He almost disappears in the shadows. I would have taken the photo when heäs on the foreground. That would have brought more sense of space and interest here. Other than that, good job. Cheers!

loneroc (1233) 2008-07-28 13:33

Hi Tan, I am surprised that you haven't got more people to comment on your photo. It has great potential! I workshopped this one for you - have a look. I like the colours and shapes of those mountains. Having that boat on the foreground makes this a much more interesting photo. Personally I would have taken it when the boat would have been more on the left, now it's a bit in the shadows. Good shot, in demading conditions. Cheers!

loneroc (1233) 2008-05-28 12:49

Hi Morris, What a great atmosphere! You've captured the spirit of Cusco (and Peru) very well. I still miss those days when I was shooting with Velvia 50. Great colours - and having strong red & blue here works miracles! One thing that I really like as well is those two silhouettes on top. Good job, indeed! Cheers!

  loneroc (1233) 2008-03-18 16:19

Hi Sabrina, Great place, indeed. As I wrote in my Workshop - great job if this is taken in a moving bus! I tried to get more contrast and punch for this one in my workshop. Have a look - hopefully you find it useful. Cheers!

loneroc (1233) 2008-03-18 15:51

Hi Werner, Good shot but that strong gray overcast take away those magnificent colours of Grand Canyon. I workshopped this image - have a look how much difference small post-processing can make! I hope you find it useful. Cheers!

loneroc (1233) 2008-03-17 2:31

Hi Alain, Great portrait with wonderful colours! Indeed, blue and orange being opposite colours in colour wheel works magic. Background is peaceful, too. Well seen. Only minor thing that I would reconsider is using white in the frame. I would have used black only. White doesn't work for me. Cheers!

loneroc (1233) 2008-03-09 17:01

Hi Alexei, Like I told in my workshop note - this kind of beach scenes are hard to get too excited about. However, your photo has great potential that can be brought up with cropping. That's exactly what I did in my WS. I hope you find it useful. Cheers!

loneroc (1233) 2008-03-08 16:21

Hi JeanNoel, Rugged mountains... I workshopped this image to get rid of the grayish tone. I hope you find it useful. I also forgot to mention that I removed 4-5 dust spots in different places. Cheers!

loneroc (1233) 2008-03-05 2:17

Hi Martin, Excellent photo in many ways. Composition is great - fence on the foreground, ruins on the background. Colours are beautiful as well. I workshopped this image - just wanted to give it a go and see how it would change with some minor improvements like auto levels and getting rid of that noise in the sky. I hope you find it useful. Cheers!

loneroc (1233) 2008-03-05 1:23

Hi Stefano, Well seen. I like the way you have captured these wonderful colours and shapes close enough. That photographer gives scale - I am thinking whether this would be even better if you'd have shown him fully. That way the impact would have been even bigger. However, this way you can keep more abstract feel into it so... Anyways, I hope you took loads of photos! Cheers!