Krytyki

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-22 9:07

Hi Debbie, This is a good subject for a textural study - you've got the natural elements: stone and wood together with the artificial: corrugated iron and cement and they're all contrasting textures. I love the warm tone of the building, but I might be tempted to take a photo of the wall square on and fill the frame with those textures. Just my thoughts! Steve.

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-21 12:19

Whoa - that's a great picture! Next time I want to see a picture from when you're actually doing the walk / fly! Steve.

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-21 12:17

Hi Debbie, I like this picture (and I think the brightness is fine!). If anything I would say the sky looks interesting and perhaps there could be more of it. Obviously rules are made for breaking, but I would be tempted to put the horizon on the lower third, and leave more for sky detail, hoping the tree would give a frame at the top of the pic. Just my 2 cents! Steve.

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-21 12:13

Great portrait! I love those eyes - going in different directions! Image looks a little bright for me - perhaps you could lower it slightly? Steve.

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-21 12:12

Lovely image, I agree with markoci! Looks like there's something going on by the umbrella that the girl is headed for. Lovely light - will try a ws myself tomorrow... Steve.

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-21 12:03

That's a great portrait with good detail and no background distractions! Colours are good - very earthy! I like the treatment. Steve.

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-21 12:01

This picture is full of intrigue! Looks like the space just 1 step to the right might have been slightly clearer and given you a better shot. Certainly you can't use flash on mist as it'll bounce back. I'll be interested to see tomorrow's pic!

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-21 11:57

Great portrait, lovely colours - very striking! She looks cheeky! Make sure you're sharp on the eyes - looks a little like it's focussed on her forehead. Steve.

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-21 11:53

Hi, good effort and great subject! 1/13 is a bit slow for a pic like this (and the VR won't help the shutter speed) so you might need to crank up the ISO next time. Steve.

stevekhart (41) 2006-08-21 11:50

ha ha! maybe he would prefer a different model from his magazine?!