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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2013-08-13 21:40] [ +] I like the simplicity of the photo, the ship with it's strong red color, and the contract with the modern architecture in the back.
It's good that you kept a wide view.
the foto doesn't seem sharp, maybe I am mistaken, but I would use a sharpening tool before posting. |
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Circus Parade albastrica
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-05-25 22:54] just made me smile . . . good composure of the guy . . . fantastic person to shoot . . . good composition . . . difficult shot with the dark parts and the sunny background :) |
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Welcome home... mariandrea
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-05-21 21:29] [ +] This is when I like TE at it's best . . . a photo with a good note.
Thank you for telling the story about this village . . . thank you for the photo . . . I like the contrast of the beige world . . . blue sky and the girl . . . a splash of color going through a door with the same color as the sky.
The composition is funny with the dog placed on the wall looking to the girl.
Less funny is the roofs . . . indicating that the houses are poor . . . but I could be mistaken! . . .
good TE moment! thanks for sharing . . .
regards,
David |
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on the road scroller
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jarkko
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 79 W: 0 N: 82]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-n-g.gif) (1171) [ 2009-05-21 14:34] Hi!
Absolutely beautiful photo. Giraffes are nicely framed by the trees and lightning is wonderful. Thanks for sharing
regards,
Jarkko |
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the best seller Senk
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-04-27 20:36] Central Europe is a plce for B&W . . . India is color!
good composition . . . bit too much red, but it's sort of ashion to blast colors nowadays . . . would have liked to see the woman's face . . . still . . . incredible shot! |
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Money's Tight Photobones
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-04-27 20:32] best contribution in ages :)
I'm not looking for the beautiful pictures on TE, but the ones that tell a story . . . and starting the day with a smile is the best thing that can happen!
6 'traktors' (as my daughter calls them - she loves machines . . .!) flattened in a perspective . . . it seems thay have hardly any space to move . . . as if they are eating the town . . .
good shot . . . also technically with good colors and details in the shadows.
regards to Obama and the mayor! |
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Passing Storm DrWu
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jarkko
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 79 W: 0 N: 82]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-n-g.gif) (1171) [ 2009-04-20 1:15] Moi,
joo, valo toimii tässä kuvassa ja sommittelukin on mukavan levollinen. Mielenkiintoinen kontrasti tuossa vasemman puolen tummasävyisyydessä verrattuna tuohon oikean puolen vaaleuteen. Hienosti nähty..
Jarkko |
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Anything otiun
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-03-05 21:26] Oleg,
The photo is stunning . . . but it belongs more on TL . . . TE is a travel site and TL is for everything else :)
regards,
David |
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~ Under the Table ~ edytungkal
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-03-05 21:20] [ +] Daniel,
I think it is a good photo, but it belongs on TL and not TE.
I don't see the connection between the child and the info about the shopping center to be important enough to be presented as 'learning about the world'. The photo has more merrit on itself :)
regards,
David |
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Thoughtful Reflection foibles3
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-01-31 12:03] Good photo . . . when I saw the thumb I wondered what I could learn from it . . . but as soon as it started to load . . . I knew the monument.
The composition is good . . . the tilted line is somewhat distracting . . .
still . . . simple and effective. |
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A Hard Land kevinos
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-01-25 21:53] Kevin,
It has been (too) long since I visited your photo's . . . and my eyes came across this one.
I enjoyed the note . . . and I'm beginning to wonder if your portfolio is starting to become the travelers guide to Budism :) . . . all you need now are some more places in China and you're complete :)
After reading the note and looking at the photo . . . I must say I like the note better . . . something is not feeling good . . . maybe the sky was washed out and you tried to correct it . . . I don't know.
Like Henk (oochappan) sais; India is impossible without color . . . but with this level of saturation I could immagine a B&W.
sorry for the critique . . . I mean it well :)
points are off . . . so it's all in bare honesty.
best of luck,
greetings,
David |
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The new boss Polonaise
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-01-20 22:00] Aaaaah . . .
4 years . . . and then again 4 years
prayers didn't even work anymore . . .
every time a promise came . . .
you could bet his guys where doing something opposite . . .
the guy was smiling George . . .
infectivly . . .
I've seen him . . . twice
you get what you deserve . . .
that's what I thought . . .
never thought it would effect my business as well . . .
let's never talk about junior again,
my hope is not on color,
not on the US,
my hope is on people who do the right thing . . .
for all people . . . no matter how much tax they pay :) |
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Yes We Can! diafani
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-01-20 21:53] As one world . . .
when Bush was re-elected it was clear that we would have to wait 4 years to clean up the mess . . . I never thought that the mess would be so big!
it's not that we can . . . it's that we have to . . .
at least there is a guy that has the support!
good shot . . . learning about the world :)
TFS
David |
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White world GitaMM (38) *
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-01-15 21:12] Oh yes . . . and how we missed it!
But finally a normal winter again . . . I spend hours cleaning up around the house . . . building 'sniega vieru' for my daughter . . . :)
And finally the snow was on the trees again . . . I like that in your photo . . . I like the composition but above all the feeling :)
maybe a bit more sharpening :)
regards,
David
-PS my points are off . . . that's why . . . - |
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A comfort Polonaise
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2009-01-06 19:21] It takes time George . . .
like good wine . . .
good photography needs time . . .
the rest is gone, rotten and forgotten . . .
the first time I wrote two ciritiques to the same photo . . . the second time I feel impressed . . . the second time I feel I can erase my Fotka's . . .
but maybe they need time too :)
smiling,
David |
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A 40mm fully erected jrj
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2008-12-18 3:15] Jack,
Disgusting Title! Terrible fotka!
Why did I ever turn my points off??
I love the colors . . .
Just a second . . .
What the h*ll is this man doing???
Jack!! a wonderful shame on you!!!
Let's all go to the gutter with George!!
and get up again,
dirty,
rotten,
photgraphers!!!
smiling,
David |
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Comrades doctabrez
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2008-11-11 3:38] Mohd,
I clicked on the thumb because I found the photo boring to look at, but I thought the note would certainly correct this.
However without a note is useless to post it on TrekEarth. The meaning of this site is to learn about the world and it's nice to know there are female soldiers in India, but for the rest I don't learn anything. |
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Tricycle Taxi JorgeCK
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2008-10-25 21:30] [ +] Jorge,
nice to see that the rikshaws are now also entering the streets of NY :) Good effect with the moving cam!
Although I like the frame, you better do not use it again, it's not allowed on TE! (on TL it is), and if the moderators will find it, it will be removed - including with the critiques people wrote.
About your note, the EXIF data are helpful, but it is possible to show it on the left, it would be more helpful if you explain what technique you used when taking the photo and post processing.
regards,
David |
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Blue Cave chiaretta
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jarkko
![Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Note Writer [C: 79 W: 0 N: 82]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-n-g.gif) (1171) [ 2008-10-09 23:45] Ciao Chiara! Very nice contrast you have in this photo. I really like the water being so dark in the front.
See you,
Jarkko |
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Last stone otiun
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Davids
![Gold Star Critiquer/Silver Workshop Editor/Silver Note Writer [C: 281 W: 21 N: 34]](//i1.trekearth.com/misc/g-s-s.gif) (56) [ 2008-10-01 6:56] Yes,
. . . and now I should write a note telling what I like about the photo . . . bla bla bla.
It's exactly what is not needed . . . it's a beautiful photo . . . point!
thanks for posting :) |
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