A Moment's Rest
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rbellemare 2012-07-27 9:04
Hello Andrew,
Very nice portrait of a every day situation. I like the fact that the first cook is appearing clear while the second one is on the move to serve a customer (I presume). I fine your picture well frame because we can see the food on the left but I'm wondering if it would not be more efficient if we could see the customers to whom the cooks seem to be responding.
Still is a great picture.
Réjean
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07-27-2012, 04:53 PM
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To rbellemare: Thanks
Thanks, Réjean - I was so focused on trying to capture the cook and grill together that I wasn't looking at surroundings for each individual shot - more of the customer might have added another interesting element. Thanks!
Andrew 
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