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Workman of saline

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keanfan (696) 2006-11-20 6:09

Excellent portrait, with very good framing. You really brought 'life' to this photo. Well done Tristan.

macondo (20449) 2006-11-20 7:23

Tristan, I like this simple, stark portrait shot. The composition is very effective, with the face of the man so small, it seems, in the frame of the window, and so plaintive. I admire the textures of the timber in this shot, too, although slightly overexposed. It's a good scan from a b/w film shot. I have started to have a look at the other b/w shots in your gallery of Madagascar salt workers.
Regards,
Andrew

trigomiro (383) 2006-11-20 8:48

Ciao Tristan,
I like very much the composition of this photo, with the face in the bottom right hand third (the most important), but I find a little overexposed the wood. I made a very fast WS (sure a better work is possible) to reduce the contrast of the whole image.
Ciao
Pier

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zips (1958) 2006-11-21 13:05

Good expression captured and the exposure is correct on the man's face. The man's right eye might look a a bit better closer to the middle, a small thing as you could crop it thusly.

Great Job.
Aloha, JB

fulya (59) 2007-01-02 12:29

çok güzel olmuş.fotograftaki adamın bakışından ruh halini pek çıkartamadım ama muhteşem olmuş eline saglık.tebrikler.