Charcoal, a photo from Rhone Alpes, South

Photographer's Note

There we go, after Yves' version, here's mine of the iconic "Crayon" from Lyon. Very similar I'll give you that but still, honestly....much better right ;-) ?

For info : 142 sec. of exposure

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williewhistler (16606) 2013-08-28 14:19

Hello Philippe,
a fine subject beautifully portrayed with a fine range of tones but.....
All the best Les!

ACL1978 (7511) 2013-08-28 14:19

Hello Philippe - very similar indeed; that you both took this shot speaks to a shared keen photographic eye, and clearly a very attractive vantage point! Your version here is a bit less sepia toned than that of sevy, but both are equally effective. Strong use of a very long exposure as well.

Andrew

Ellov (104) 2013-08-28 14:22

En tous cas, je préfčre ton titre ;)

carlo62 (81265) 2013-08-28 15:50

Ciao Philippe
la differenza piů evidente č nel....titolo.
Ottima prova anche la tua, avevo detto di non aver mai visto questa costruzione da questo punto di vista e adesso č successo due volte in due giorni :)
Ottimo lavoro.
Saluti
Carlo

jjcordier (79299) 2013-08-28 22:12

Philippe
Difficile de départager les deux compétiteurs sans se fâcher avec l'autre -) Belle version avec cet étonnant effet fusain (tu as gagné la compet pour le titre en tout cas!)
Amicalement
JJ

sevy (58) 2013-08-29 0:01

Arrrgh, ça me fait mal de le dire, mais oui ta version N&B est plus flatteuse. Notamment par la variation de lumičre sur le taille fusain et pour le contraste plus élevé.
Mais je viens de contrattaquer avec une punchy version couleur.

Yves.

baclama (19214) 2013-08-29 0:18

bonjour,
je suis d'accord avec toi je prefere la tienne ;-)
bravo en tout cas pour toujours créer des images differentes avec ce crayon....
bonne journée
vero

willperrett (14215) 2013-08-29 0:42

Hello Philippe
I'm always attracted to monochrome images, and thus alighted here. Very graphic, beautiful geometries. But I can't understand the odd streakiness in the sky: I note that it's there in Yves' version as well. Are we looking through a glass ceiling or something similar? It doesn't look like any sky I've seen, especially as there appears to be a fall-off round the curved wall edges, suggesting some P'shop intervention...
Regards
Will

mjw364 (1466) 2013-08-29 0:45

Hello Phillipe

I like this image - great POV and great lines. Liking the sky due to the long exposure and taken with one of my favourite lenses!

TFS

Mike

mirosu (16313) 2013-08-29 6:23

Hi Philippe,
Outstanding monochrome photo, excellent light, superb viewpoint. Superb view-up. Well done. Greetings, Miro

Romano46 (18472) 2013-08-29 10:32

Ciao Philippe
complimenti per questo splendido bianco e nero che si fa notare anche per la bellezza della composizione.
Una perfetta fusione di forme e di toni che denotano un occhio molto attento nel cogliere al meglio le forme che il mondo che ci circonda ci offre.
Ottima la postproduzione che mette in evidenza la bellezza delle forme geometriche in un quadro dominato da eccellente nitidezza e perfetto contrasto.
Bravissimo.
Ciao e buona serata
Romano

Waylim (25436) 2013-09-11 18:32

Hello Philippe,

I love this b&w better than the color version. Excellent shot of the modern architectural abstract. I also like the sense of movement of the cloud and the ? mark on the image.

Way