pediatrics II (Say Aaahh!), a photo from Sachsen, East

Photographer's Note

Building for the Pediatrics services of the Universitäts Klinikum Carl Gustav Carus.

"Hallo, Stefan! So, where does it hurt? Oh, I see.. Can you please open your mouth? And now say Aaahh. Ok. Well, for sure he...."

So, what is the problem with this picture? Two opposing perspective distortions..
If you read the note to the previous picture it gets clear...

Iup, the wall is distorted itself, concave for the viewer on the outside of the building. And taking the picture from the street level gives this result. For sure you can "correct" it by individually cropping each window but I like it this way :)

apazevedo, Porteplume oznaczył to zdjęcie jeko użyteczne

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paguru (1056) 2004-11-14 6:44

Impressive composition, Anton. I say Aaaah because those colors almost hurt my eyes. I would say the frame is too heavy, but it also increases the contrast. A fine graphic composition, and I also like the distortion, otherwise it might look too perfect.
Regards,
Oliver

apazevedo (5469) 2004-11-14 10:55

Very strong colours but a very effective result, Anton! I don't care too much about rules of photography, each one of us has their own tastes, so I go for what I see and feel and I just liked this one!

RandomCameraGuy (3071) 2004-11-14 17:11

That is some fine work in colour archetectural photography your doing with this series Anton. Very nice. The confusing perspective of this shot is what makes this more than just a pretty shot. The wide black frame accentuates it well. Cheers man!

JesusV (924) 2004-11-15 12:46

I like the minimalism of the pciture, the pure colors and lines. Jesus

babul (612) 2004-12-09 12:37 [Comment]

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purplelights (0) 2005-01-12 7:04

you choose a beautiful subjects, a fan of modern art as it shows on most of your photographs, minimalist...the good combination of colors, the guy on the window, looks creepy but it always overshadows by the colors of the building , quite enticing for children...tfs!

Porteplume (4036) 2005-01-22 7:15

Ah! Now I understand why you clicked "Useful" under the note of my last picture... :o) - You seem to have something in common with Pieter Mondriaan.

Strong composition again but I would have try to decenter the limit of the colours?

DonGusti (942) 2007-03-25 6:10

Interesting idea you are presenting, the black frame adds a lot. I like it :D

Gusti

Photo Information

Copyright: Anton Khmelinskii (khmelins) (960)
Genre: Miejsca
Medium: Kolorowe
Date Taken: 2004-11-13
Categories: Architektura
Camera: HP Photosmart 850
Naświetlenie: f/3.6, 1/304 sekund
Wersja zdjęcia: Oryginalna wersja
Temat(y): Resembling Modern Art, Pediatrics, Square Format [view contributor(s)]
Date Submitted: 2004-11-14 6:35
Ulubione: 1 [Widok]