Waiting, a photo from Heves, East

Photographer's Note

In Hatvan, I have to wait about one hour for the train in the afternoon, so I took some photos, here is the first piece of this serie.

I would like to show you the boring, inert waiting at this barren industrial place.

I chose BW to emphasize that certain feeling and the contrast of the stock-still air and the hiperactive children.

And to be honest while I took these photos I was thinking on a blues. So for me these photos are blues illustrations in a way.

gokanlam, burGu, jorgi, arturski, portmanndominic oznaczył to zdjęcie jeko użyteczne

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gokanlam (6605) 2008-05-15 7:02

Hi Jalab,
thank you so much for your nice words on my last photo.. i've found a chance to discover your gallery. long shadows and the light give great effect, and there is a nice graphical effect with the bench.. i like the shadows of legs of children:)
Compliments,
ReLa

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ninaL (21348) 2008-05-15 12:45

Hi, Jalab.
I like it a lot.
This a true photography...
A scene which tells a story we can imagine.
Beautiful light and shadows.
I think I would juste like crop a little on the top, to don't see the sky.
Best regards. Grazyna.

jorgi (3810) 2008-05-16 0:40

Hi Jalab,

when light is just right even most industrial or dull environments glow and show their beauty. This image is all about light which gives marvelous graphical output due to sharp and exact shadows. BW conversion works very well and you managed to create that feeling of watching toward the sun and seeing almost nothing but silhuettes. Beautifully captured ambient and mood.

Kind regards,
Jeri

burGu (4840) 2008-05-16 4:23

Hi Jalab,
Your patience for the train and assessing this period by photographing is really admirable :)
B&W is absolutely right choice for emphasizing children silhouettes and shadows with the light on bench.
Best wishes,
Burcu

bobocortis (16090) 2008-05-17 4:41

Hi Jalab.
A wonderful B&W with this portait of two children waiting for the train.
Nice backlight with extreme high lights.
Well done.
Best regards.
Bobo.

Csilla (1782) 2008-05-18 20:14

Szia Jalab!
Nagyon kedves foto a vonatvaro fiucskakrol. Anno, mi is hasonlokepp izgatottan lestuk, mikor jon mar!! Tetszenek a fenyek, de foleg az arnyekok, kulonoskepp a lelogo labake. :)
Udv, Csilla

arturski (4465) 2008-05-18 23:42

Hi Jalab!
Good work, great effect!
Regards
Artur

portmanndominic (2400) 2008-06-04 3:24

hello Jalab

nice shot of a feeling , BW is good for that , it's outer of time picture
TFS
friendly
Dominic

RADEEH (2802) 2008-06-21 8:09

The children seems counting the number of wagons passing by. Good effort of capturing this scene with harsh lights and it turned to be brilliant shot.

brevbrev14 (140) 2008-07-23 6:14