Fisherman, a photo from Ventspils, West

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dragonslayero (3592) 2006-09-27 16:43

Hello Reinis

Beautiful sunset, the siluette works great with the background colours, but I feel it is too centered.

It is pretty obvious that the long dark thing the fisherman is holding on to is the boat, but I don't feel the placing is right.
Right now it almsot gives the impression that the fisherman is a part of the boat, it is simply too melted together.
Also the framing is a bit tight, having just a little more "air" in the bottom of the phtoo would have placed the boat at and the fisherman at just the right place.

Odd Jarle