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batalay
(41261) 2007-11-27 7:54
Hello Jerzy,
This is a very beautiful b&w portrait of the young lady. The background is blurred and does not detract. A compelling aspect of the image is that you have put one of her eyes (her left eye) right on the vertical centerline. It was discovered in 1998 by the British psychologist, Christopher Tyler, that in all great portraits (by Leonardo, Rembrandt...) that one eye goes through the centerline. This is never taught to painters in art school, but talented painters pick it up intuitively. I hope you can read English, because this is relevant for your portrait. I wrote more about this in my book, 'Math and the Mona Lisa,' but take a look at the note accompanying the photo, Natural Blond, for a more comprehensive explanation.
Warm regards from Virginia, USA,
Bulent
Gustaw
(21670) 2007-11-27 7:55
Cześć!
Ciekawy portret młodej kobiert. Choć to chyba nie zdjęcie na TE. Istotnie, jest bardzo ładna. Przydałoby się chyba więcej ostrości i kontrastu.
Pozdrawiam.
Marek
GusTheo
(80) 2007-11-27 8:19
This is a very nice portrait of a very beautiful girl. I like the shallow depth of field and the tones of the photoo.
brandstaetter
(15915) 2007-11-27 8:33
Hi Jerzy,
very good portrait; an important fact for quality is in my opinion that the subject does not smile. In the beginnings of photography everybody thought, that the one smiling looses his dignity. Somehow it´s right. The new cameras with an automatic smile recognition are pure nonsense, I think.
TFS Christian
humanist
(695) 2007-11-27 9:40
Great light on here face. I love the clarity of the eyes and the gaze. The messy hair provides great detail to contrast against the OOF background.
AyseGurel
(574) 2007-11-27 9:43
Hello;
very strong expression in her eyes...great B&W potrait...simple;strong and charming...
TFS
ayse
Graal
(103040) 2007-11-27 10:03
Czesc Jurku,
pieknie zrobiony portret pieknej kobiety, swietnie rozmyte tlo i mieciutko pokazana modelka. Tak byc powinno a ten WS "experta" Gustawa to dla mnie tragiczny. Dobra robota.
Pozdr. Aleksander
lasscor
(7640) 2007-11-27 14:07
Hi Jerzy,
Wonderful expressive natural portrait.
Lovely face and eyes.
TFS,
Corinne
Jackos
(3542) 2007-11-28 1:03
Znakomity portret w pięknej tonacji, idealne światło. WS Marka niestety zabija klimat tego zdjęcia.
Pozdrawiam
Photo Information
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Copyright: Jerzy Cierpicki (skorpion13)
(2158)
- Genre: Ludzie
- Medium: Czarno-białe
- Date Taken: 2007-08-30
- Categories: Życie codzienne
- Naświetlenie: f/inf, 1/500 sekund
- More Photo Info: view
- Wersja zdjęcia: Oryginalna wersja, Workshop
- Temat(y): Favourite portraits, CLODO's selection [view contributor(s)]
- Date Submitted: 2007-11-27 7:42
- Ulubione: 1 [Widok]
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