A moment inside, a photo from Lisboa, South

Photographer's Note

a moment inside stops the hasty day
eyes closed look around to find
everyday companions and common occupations;
in quick succession come recollection, regret, resolution
as heart rises and grows
and sucks a tremendous amount of life into this tiny moment,
(apparently nothing happened,
proving that appearances can often fool you)

riclopes, jasmis, falves, scobert, luisafonso oznaczył to zdjęcie jeko użyteczne

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riclopes (35577) 2007-04-24 8:34

Provavelmente nada de especial está a acontecer, mas gosto do toque poético que lhe queres dar. Muitas vezes este tipo de foto é considerada um momento mal apanhado ("ohhh, ficou de olhos fechados!", mas tudo depende da nossa interpretaçăo e da maneira como olhamos as coisas. Poderá estar concentrada nas costas dela e a concentrar-se melhor fechando os olhos.
Um bom 'moment inside'.
ricardo

jasmis (58653) 2007-04-24 9:14

Extraordinary portrait with deeper idea. Smart DOF. Amazing note, no doubt. Thanks for sharing.
Regards!

falves (1405) 2007-04-24 9:28

Hi P, Nice moment inside. Very creative and Meaningful. As usual the note is suberb and it's the key of the set. Like to sea the soft background with smooth colors which brings a bit more "mystic" to your compo.
Grande Abraço
Fred

ninaL (21348) 2007-04-24 9:36

Good composition...I'm just wondering about not entierly closed eyes...but is interesting capture eventhought.
Best wishes. Grazyna.

bantonbuju (51815) 2007-04-24 13:15

i think the photo itself could have been sharper but the "fadoish" mood of this photo is just more than a reason to photograph this scene - the meliza-like pose of the woman makes me feel the mood of the lisboa street again...
bw, j.

scobert (5355) 2007-04-24 15:12

Hello Peter,
You have a good photo here but it appears to be a little soft with too much magenta on the woman's face (my opinion). Your compositions are always outstanding and creative as well as is your poetry. A good photo though with an excellent expression from this women. Thanks for your continued critiques and comments.
Stan

jinju (14265) 2007-04-24 21:52

The only thing I could be critical of is the sharpnss. Really, a bit more and this would be better, but its not a bad photo as is. The mood is far more important than sharpness and the mood is here.

luisafonso (862) 2007-04-27 3:28

Sharpness. Nem sei como isto se diz em portuguęs... Eu năo gosto de fotos desfocadas quando năo há razăo para tal. É o caso aqui. Năo há razăo nenhuma para que ela esteja desfocada. Aliás, nada está focado nesta imagem. O pessoal deixa passar estas deficięncias técnicas por que gostam de ti :), mas eu năo... Quando começas a postar estas fotos significa que está na hora de saires de casa ŕ procura de fotos novas... :) 1 ponto pela composiçăo que está boa. E pelo momento.